Absolutely love it around 2:10! I like psytrance in that way really much! Sounds good for a background theme as in a scary shooting game. I didn't like the lead at 2:47. It doesnt fit imo. The bassline is cool and sounds really good for a trance song. Only you could add a variation in the bassline. Its repetitve.
At 1:20, a random squeezing sound appeared. Don't know what to say about it.... it sounds lame. Then you get the tape stop at 1:46 - 1:52, when it ends, a new part starts like its roughly pasted after the stop.
Also, some parts are really getting strange. Like in the beginning with the crushed bits and the end. These don't fit too. :s
Well, keep it up.