Hey man, this song is a bit repetitive, As i can say. It could have more beats in it. Also the vocal sounds weird and is not on beat. I don't know the frenchcore thing, but it sounds weird, yeah. The lead at 0:40 is strange. The part at 1:10 is cool, but also I hear clipping between the kicks, which sound not so fun to my ears. The ending could also be better, because it ended with a strange timed delay and a reversed cymbal. That's all, Don't want to come over as an aggressive person. Hope you'll keep it cool. Cheers!