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[Reverse Forward]

Cool! Kinda liking the beat and it's melody. If I were you I would make a different bassline, the only bass I hear is the kick and in the background there is just a weak wobbly sidechained bass. For the build starting at 0:54 I think you could have used a rise sound. At 1:08 and 2:58 , I prefer an instant start of the 4-on-the-floor kickbeat instead of waiting to kick it in for 1 bar. Also, I really miss the open and closed hihats, especially in this type of music. It would make a huge different and it gives the beat a huge boost. I really like the mixdown. Good use of up and downlifters. There is no such problem about the mastering. Not too loud nor too harsh. I also like the melody change in the end at 3:50! Good work dude!

Lalalo14 responds:

Yeah the bass kinda suck now! I EQ'd it down too much because I was getting a distortion sound with the combination of the main lead, kick and the bass.
I totally agree about the build-up. Now it's just a standard snare getting faster. It needs something more. Going to try to add a upriser there!
There actually is a open snare that begins at 1:35, but I think it's too low and not as crisp as it should be right now.

Thanks alot for the review man! One of the most detailed I've gotten and I like it!

[Eternal Friendship]

Oh man. isn't that the 'Countdown' Sytrus preset? I missed it :'( Cool ideas but sounds like you just threw some random sounds in one song. The kick's punching randomly too. No actual beat or so. Try making it more listenable, please. (:

AyzanNightbane responds:

Actually, that's exactly what I did. I did work on the beat though. Just kinda felt pretty mischievous yesterday.

[Freestyle 1 - Z-$]

Next level Eminem.

SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Haha appreciate that bro.
Always check back for more.

ZieGie

[-WestNote-]

Oh this is so well done. Amazing tune Waterflame! The melodies are totally rocking me! May be your best song this year!

[Machina]

This... This is a masterpiece... You sir are too good. I feel so noob and bad now.
Amazing drop and those highpitched vocal chops were so amazing. How did you make that?

[Rise]

Not bad. I hear you like the Nexus vst? :D

larrynachos responds:

I love nexus <3

[Tsukinomori]

Wow. Good song. Really love it. Cool use of instruments and lots of variety.
One thing bugs me and that's around 1:00-1:07, after some good listening I came to a conclusion that the drums (or drumloop) do not really fit with the beat of the instruments (as for the bass that goes off the drum beat). The drums may be too fast I think.

Anyways the rest is well done!

SilverPoyozo responds:

It's true, they do not work very well. It's because of the electric bass, I kinda screwed up with the tempo there.

Thanks though!