Really good (for the first time?) If you hear my first song you would probably throw up... I think you could put more variation in the wubs and add more wubs and sounds in the wub parts, because it sounds a bit monotonous. Also the beat is repetitive, but catchy. But for your first submission is it really good! Keep up the good work. I'd like to see you growing in composing music. So here you get your first fan! :) (srry for bad English :S)