This melody, cant stop listening to it! btw, compared to the other song the clap sound is really low during the main melody, at 3:20 as example. I also agree with the comments below that its kind of empty. Could have used more instruments, find a way where it doesnt sound empty, but not too messy though. Like a sidechained lead! Those leads always sound awesome in dance songs. You dont have to put the volume of them too high, just that there is one in the background. :) The intro was fun to listen to, better than the first version! After 1:50 is sort of an empty part, a pad (or sidechained pad) can fill it up! Im sure it doesnt sound to messy then!
But other than that, GREAT remake! :D Best dance composer on NG. KEEP UP DUDE!!